Manuscript 3 is dated "Oct 30" and the heading is "Adapted from a journal." A note identifies two features: a "gradual mellowing of a viewpoint - the long wait for this - REBIRTH" and "the use of other poets." Manuscript 1 contains the phrases "objects of desire" and "love without an object."
See the link to "Langdon Hammer's Criticism" on this poem's "classroom parody" and carefully stated conception of form: “'Form' is shorthand for style or manner, the poet’s bearing on the page and not simply his skillful prosody, although that is essential to it. 'Form' implies a contract with the reader, an intimacy grounded in shared respect" (328).